I saw you in the eve'ning
Soft halo'ed through the haze
And there beneath the glowing sun
Your visage was ablaze.
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This deserves 5 stars over and over! Great writing you put the image into the words very well
I gave it 4 stars not one Valerie! Great images, beautifully flowing. and so penetrable.
Beautiful story. Touching narrative. Truly poetic.
Great job of expressing the feeling in the words! Very wonderful poem I really like this!
The magnificent combination of Beauty, Faith, Love and Sorrow so impeccably and touchingly expressed. Just about the best!
This is a beautiful/ and beautifully written poem! I really do like this! !