I saw you in the eve'ning
Soft halo'ed through the haze
And there beneath the glowing sun
Your visage was ablaze.
But I saw you in the moonlight
With stardust in your hair -
Transported from the realms of heav'n
It seemed, as you stood there.
Your beauty was amazing
It captured full my soul -
An angel sent from higher realms
To render each one whole.
But then I saw you weeping
Beneath the dark'ning sky -
I wondered why such sorrow borne
Could ever make you cry.
You carried all the heartache
That all below endure
Upon your soft and gentle form
So perfect and so pure.
I could not bear to witness
Such pain and hurt displayed -
To see you drown in teardrops spilled
As then to Him you prayed.
If only I could touch you
But you were just a dream -
A vision in my troubled mind
Cast in the moonlight's beam.
25/1/24
Great job of expressing the feeling in the words! Very wonderful poem I really like this!
This is a beautiful/ and beautifully written poem! I really do like this! !
This deserves 5 stars over and over! Great writing you put the image into the words very well
I gave it 4 stars not one Valerie! Great images, beautifully flowing. and so penetrable.
Beautiful story. Touching narrative. Truly poetic.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The magnificent combination of Beauty, Faith, Love and Sorrow so impeccably and touchingly expressed. Just about the best!