Sunday, December 8, 2019

I Saw You In My Mystical Dream Comments

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I saw you in my mystical dream
Standing on a steep mountain peak
I lifted my head upwards rolling my eyes up
You were standing as if a roaring lion
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Mohammad Younus
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Anil Kumar Panda 08 December 2019

The last line reveals the suspense that you build in the poem. Beautifully crafted and the poem has a nice flow. Thanks for sharing.

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