Thursday, September 20, 2012

I Saw You As I`ve Never Seen Before Comments

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I saw you as I`ve never seen before
The moon upon your lovely face did play
Your eyes as starlight fixed on heaven`s door
So sparkled at the closing of the day
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Valerie Dohren
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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 23 June 2013

Great poem as always Valerie, great imagery too. Siya_! !

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 15 November 2012

Eloquent, brilliant, and truly inspiring.

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Akanksha Bhatt 30 September 2012

its beautiful. i really liked this one! its a humble request to you to read mine also and dropp your comments...!

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Hazel Durham 30 September 2012

A great heartfelt poem full of beautiful imagery, amazing write!

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Stevie Taite 30 September 2012

And now I read the sadness of that last look at breathing flesh and I have she'd a tear. Still beautiful.

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Stevie Taite 30 September 2012

I love your Style of poetry! ! ! They are flawless! This is yet another example and makes me want to read it again just because it is so beautiful (rather than having to fathom it out) x. I aspire to be as good as you!

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Joseph Anderson 27 September 2012

It seems a recommitment to one you must dearly love.A model for love poetry-graceful and compassionate

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Neela Nath Das 23 September 2012

A soothing poem. While reading this I felt we should be like you calm, quiet.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 23 September 2012

sometimes, we think this way too..interesting poem!

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Valsa George 21 September 2012

So melodious and a real joy to read! ! ! ! !

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Dave Walker 21 September 2012

A very beautiful poem, to feel so much love is the best feeling.

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Dee Corpolongo 20 September 2012

Beautiful and loving poem, with many emotions felt and described. You write the most amazing poems, Val. Thanks for sharing them with everyone.....and I love it's title too..!

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Poppa Yao 20 September 2012

Great read Valerie. Isnt it funny how love can open or blind the eye to 'see like....before? ' very sweet poem

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Danny Draper 20 September 2012

A beautiful loving and compassionate poem of adoration and the love of one to know another so well in intricate and careful description and emotion. Uplifting and celebratory of lasting dear love.

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Heather Wilson 20 September 2012

So enchanting Val, this poem shows such heartfelt love, and such a pleasure to read.

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Joseph Anderson 20 September 2012

A grand and precious awakening and when the morrow comes it shall be even better. Your muse has returned, better than ever

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Payal Parande 20 September 2012

so beautiful and mesmerizing...mam your every poem is like sweet bewitching melody to me..this piece is glorious, magnificent....and so many beautiful things... thank you so much for sharing love, payal

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