I saw you as I`ve never seen before
The moon upon your lovely face did play
Your eyes as starlight fixed on heaven`s door
So sparkled at the closing of the day
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its beautiful. i really liked this one! its a humble request to you to read mine also and dropp your comments...!
A great heartfelt poem full of beautiful imagery, amazing write!
And now I read the sadness of that last look at breathing flesh and I have she'd a tear. Still beautiful.
I love your Style of poetry! ! ! They are flawless! This is yet another example and makes me want to read it again just because it is so beautiful (rather than having to fathom it out) x. I aspire to be as good as you!
It seems a recommitment to one you must dearly love.A model for love poetry-graceful and compassionate
A soothing poem. While reading this I felt we should be like you calm, quiet.
sometimes, we think this way too..interesting poem!
A very beautiful poem, to feel so much love is the best feeling.
Beautiful and loving poem, with many emotions felt and described. You write the most amazing poems, Val. Thanks for sharing them with everyone.....and I love it's title too..!
Great read Valerie. Isnt it funny how love can open or blind the eye to 'see like....before? ' very sweet poem
A beautiful loving and compassionate poem of adoration and the love of one to know another so well in intricate and careful description and emotion. Uplifting and celebratory of lasting dear love.
So enchanting Val, this poem shows such heartfelt love, and such a pleasure to read.
A grand and precious awakening and when the morrow comes it shall be even better. Your muse has returned, better than ever
so beautiful and mesmerizing...mam your every poem is like sweet bewitching melody to me..this piece is glorious, magnificent....and so many beautiful things... thank you so much for sharing love, payal
Great poem as always Valerie, great imagery too. Siya_! !