Wednesday, September 28, 2011

I Saw The Heaven Comments

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Last night I slept, was drowned in dream
Angels came, played and danced with me.
A child angel wanted to take me together
But senior angels refused to accept his prayer.
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S.D. TIWARI
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Vipins Puthooran 30 September 2011

A nice piece of poetry... Wonderful depiction of heaven.... Well written.. Tops marks for you

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 September 2011

Every one was enjoying, in the God’s heaven.....yes nice place dreamed by everyone... lovely poem.....10

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