I Saw Her Today... Comments

Flash or catalysis in poetic mind in reading room [very infectious lolol] with crafting poem…as poet has done it…excellent… But finish is awesome well ‘i am not at ease these days....’ hush huh hu in poetic mind and readers too Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

dear prashant........i could almost visualise this pretty girl of your poem.beautiful flow of words makes it more interesting.lovely poem..........ritty

And her naughty eyes had a lovely lure as anyone who tries would be lost for sure.... And I prayed today GOD make me all hers and let me stay within her life's verse.....well you are lost in pull..there is rule of attraction and it works..it is natural that one is drawn into ////// lovly poem....10 read mine...anywhere.... imiss..miss i miss u..... marry to merry..(this u must read)

Smooth in its flow, bright in its glow powerful in its meaning and grand in its content...this is a wondeful poem...I am giving it a 10

oh... a very beautiful poem! ...

member: Mary Spain The girl in the library may well have been startled at finding she had become your Muse.. but she should have been privileged to inspire such a fine poem.. mary

what a wonderful story

what comes from the heart touches the heart... always remember this. beautiful words coming out from your heart and pen. keep writing. take care

Beautiful. Well penned Keep write Enjoyed reading it

you wrote it well... Sir.

I enjoyed your poem...you are so clever and I believe object of your admiration know it also...thumb up! ! ! ....+10 point is yours!

I take this poem for it soundness whether it fatch you the lady or not. K**p it up.

wow... very beautifully written.... ten on ten.... wish wud have been at that girl's place ;)

And I prayed today GOD make me all hers and let me stay within her life's verse... This is so wonderful, prashant. Some would pray for God to make her all yours; you instead pray to be hers, all of you. Fantastic. I guess you have so much to offer her.10, indeed

a charming poem... i can't imagine her not liking it.....

Oh, this is so sweet! A perfect opening scene in a movie. How did she react? In as many ways as we are readers, I guess. No, I do wish and hope she reacted in the way you wanted her to, Prashant...congratulations! lol

very romantic...cheers for your efforts

Your words used to describe a stranger are wonderful. Great poem! I hope the girl is yours :)

I don't know how did she react but must be flattered by this lovely poem. I hope that she will acknowledge your feelings about her and you will be at ease soon. Best Wishes Naseer

a poetic gesture of admiration...well worded, I am sure this poem has left an indelible mark on her mind!