I Saw An Old Friend… Comments

I believe this is a universal experience, I may be wrong but I think all of us have witnessed the slow dying and then the final death of what we thought would be a lasting friendship.Your detailed and progressive account makes the inevitability believable. The tension created by the slow pace of this poem is almost unbearable, I wanted to skip ahead to verify the sad conclusion but I did not because I also realized this is a song of the hurt heart. The role of the reader/listener is to be the patient witness and that means the whole of it, not just bits and pieces.

Enjoyed the envision. Thanks for sharing