Wednesday, June 12, 2013

I Saw A Man Drowning Comments

Rating: 5.0

I saw a man drowning
unknowing
Greif lapping against his soul
mournful waves of nostalgia
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keith brown
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Edward Kofi Louis 01 May 2020

The world could barely hear him! ! ! ! I saw a man drowning. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 12 June 2013

Beautiful metaphor! The last 4 lines attain poetic heights.10.

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