Wednesday, August 6, 2014

I Saw A Little Girl Today... Comments

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...I saw a little girl today who's hair had gone away
The tube inside her nose explained the reason for decay
There was a glow about her though, as if her spirit knew
Her time on Earth was limited, if only others knew
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Daniel Beaird
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Pranayee Gupta Rachamalla 10 January 2016

an emotional poem.......very well written.....keep sharing!

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Heenal Vora 07 January 2016

Its an emotional one..... its explained in a very correct manner... well constructed one.... keep sharing it

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Dan Beaird 07 January 2016

Thanks Heenal

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 January 2016

Her time on Earth was limited, if only others knew How precious little time we have upon this mortal sphere To learn, to love, to understand, to triumph over fear oneday our time also will come. the spirit should glow in us then. very fine reflection to a spiritual outlook. thank you. tony

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Dan Beaird 07 January 2016

Thank you Tony

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