Wednesday, January 26, 2011

I Saved Her, For Her Comments

Rating: 5.0

The day I was born,
With my blurred vision
Recognizing slowly everyone around me
I heard about my father,
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Rahul Singh Rana
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Zaineb Hafeez 24 April 2016

Amazingggg one :)

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Noreen Carden 17 September 2013

Hello Rahul a wonderful poem mother country and birth mother both honoured very enjoyable read well done

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Lemac Lemac 18 January 2012

good message, strong delivery, cogent art

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Agatha Eliza 02 March 2011

I trully enjoyed reading this poem.there are plenty of heartfull feelings which mingle there with the love for your country.we should be grateful to have both of them, because there can't be one without the other.wonderful!

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Rekha Mandagere 28 February 2011

Indeed it is a fine work! Greater value of life 'PATRIOTISM is attained with integrity and clarity.Write more!

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Narayanan Ramakrishnan 28 February 2011

The poet's love for hiscountry, another mother, and his mother amply portrayed. Great write. write more. not just seven.

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Narayanan Ramakrishnan 28 February 2011

The poet's love for hiscountry, another mother, and his mother amply portrayed. Great write. write more. not just seven.

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Narayanan Ramakrishnan 28 February 2011

The poet's love for hiscountry, another mother, and his mother amply portrayed. Great write. write more. not just seven.

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Amartya Kalapahar 02 February 2011

Well constructed. Keep it up.

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Leela Devi 02 February 2011

glad to read such a nice piece /keep writing

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Ibnu Din Assingkiri 02 February 2011

This poem is very inspiring about love of mother and country. It reflects a deep love. The selection of the proper words to express the meaning of the poet. Bravo!

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Premkumar Khumanthem 02 February 2011

Wow its awesome indeed! It really indicate the important and need of mother. And how much a mother care for us! But how can we returnest there credit! ! ! Ok please read my Poem 'The Traveler' and coment what you feel a

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 01 February 2011

Very fascinating indeed. Mother has the highest place whether it is our mother who gives us birth or motherland. In all religions mother holds the highest honour. In Islam Heaven lies under her feet. Excellent piece of writing.

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Lynn Glover 01 February 2011

Excellent prose by a young writer. Very deep and very thoughtful of Moms everywhere. A 10.

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Elvira Gasser 01 February 2011

well written, very true story about giving up what most people take for granted, for the love of ones country, and for the love of our mothers, thank you for shearing :)

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Abhay Vignesh L 01 February 2011

Great effort.Very thought provoking.Covering the period from birth to a near death experience in a battlefield.Ill give it a 10

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Rajaram Ramachandran 31 January 2011

A thought provoking poem with deep feelings inside for the missing souls.

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Rekha Mandagere 31 January 2011

Rahul, This poem is really inspired me. Great! ! ! Rahul read my poems too.(My Ideal son, The Festival of Light... Rekha Sathya) ...)

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Enyinwa Okechukwu Enyinwa 29 January 2011

Great poem, art work, very touching.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 26 January 2011

Intrigue ing piece of writing.

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