The day I was born,
With my blurred vision
Recognizing slowly everyone around me
I heard about my father,
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Hello Rahul a wonderful poem mother country and birth mother both honoured very enjoyable read well done
I trully enjoyed reading this poem.there are plenty of heartfull feelings which mingle there with the love for your country.we should be grateful to have both of them, because there can't be one without the other.wonderful!
Indeed it is a fine work! Greater value of life 'PATRIOTISM is attained with integrity and clarity.Write more!
The poet's love for hiscountry, another mother, and his mother amply portrayed. Great write. write more. not just seven.
The poet's love for hiscountry, another mother, and his mother amply portrayed. Great write. write more. not just seven.
The poet's love for hiscountry, another mother, and his mother amply portrayed. Great write. write more. not just seven.
This poem is very inspiring about love of mother and country. It reflects a deep love. The selection of the proper words to express the meaning of the poet. Bravo!
Wow its awesome indeed! It really indicate the important and need of mother. And how much a mother care for us! But how can we returnest there credit! ! ! Ok please read my Poem 'The Traveler' and coment what you feel a
Very fascinating indeed. Mother has the highest place whether it is our mother who gives us birth or motherland. In all religions mother holds the highest honour. In Islam Heaven lies under her feet. Excellent piece of writing.
Excellent prose by a young writer. Very deep and very thoughtful of Moms everywhere. A 10.
well written, very true story about giving up what most people take for granted, for the love of ones country, and for the love of our mothers, thank you for shearing :)
Great effort.Very thought provoking.Covering the period from birth to a near death experience in a battlefield.Ill give it a 10
A thought provoking poem with deep feelings inside for the missing souls.
Rahul, This poem is really inspired me. Great! ! ! Rahul read my poems too.(My Ideal son, The Festival of Light... Rekha Sathya) ...)
Amazingggg one :)