I save this teardrop
Invaluable as it is
For my journey
Full of rocks and bushes thorny
And I drink it
As a drop of rain
In hot Summer.
Compares a tear drop to water one might need for a journey under the hot sun of summer.
It is in our difficulties that we experience the most growth. Invaluable indeed are those precious teardrops. A simple yet very deep poem
When life looks like the summer the drunk tears appear as drops in the next rainy season. A great poem.
Thank you Akhtar Jawadji for reading my poem and your great comment.
very inspiring lines mam.... we all need to be strong enough to fight with our problems.....
Topic is certainly teardrop. Hide and drink this saline recalls a lot.I am sure, no poet can exactly pen the severity of this moment. Alive.But, you can do it. Kindly, retry it.
Thank you Bichitra Anand for your wonderful comment.Many times I go through the comments of my readers to get inspiration.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Always have something to fall back on when the going gets tough, you have put it very clearly in these short lines-10
Thanks for your nice comment.