Thursday, February 19, 2009

I Sat Patiently Without A Tear Comments

Rating: 5.0

I sat patiently without a tear,
As the people stopped and stared.
I knew why we were all here,
But acted as if nobody cared.
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Alex waters
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Leslie Ching 24 February 2009

i'm not sure i completely understand this...but don't worry, it's probably from my complete lacking of realistic experiences...still an excellent write, nice rhyme and rhythm 10/10..................................................lc

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