Wednesday, May 6, 2009

I Sat Down To Write A Line... Comments

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I sat down to write a comment line
Over two cups of good red wine
Listening to the midnight rain-
In one poem 'Rain' I mean
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 06 January 2010

'This N… The Zen Helps you to contemplate And encapsulate Your pen P ~ O ~ E ~ M*.' ~ niv Ms. Nivedita UK --- * For each alphabet two and half into four is equal to Ten

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Patti Masterman 18 August 2009

I love this, though it may cause me to experiment with alphabetical excursions..(smile)

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Catrina Heart 15 July 2009

Friends are shapes Flow around the space Friends are angles Sharing common symmetrical patterns Sometimes like Numbers Even or odd – you’ll remember In simple or complex life’s equation TRUE Friends share honest opinion Hence.......Even without N It won't change the condition Thanks!

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Kesav Easwaran 21 May 2009

Yes; missing boldly! Thanks Chitra...liked your witty comment

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Chitra - 21 May 2009

Very amusig, thaks to the electroic revolutio ad the side effects that come with it.. do you fiNd aNything missiNg in the first few words of my commeNt :)

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Smiley Hooker 20 May 2009

this is my second encounter with today's 'RAIN' matter. thank you for sharing this funny poem! : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -)

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Thad Wilk 17 May 2009

Hi Kesav! Good thing your key board don't raise havoc with the A's or you would be Kesv Venkt Eswrn ! ! Kidding Lol ! ! Best wishes! *10*! Friend Thad

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Michael Harmon 17 May 2009

A nice idea for a light poem. May I offer one suggestion? Rather than using some prose to explain the genesis of the poem afterwards, expand the poem itself by incorporating the explanation (in verse) at the beginning of it.

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Sandra Fowler 17 May 2009

Very amusing. A smile for you. Warm regards, Sandra

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John Lyday 17 May 2009

Humorous ditty. Worthy of a chuckle anytime. I liked it.

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Danny H 17 May 2009

xD thats so cool and creative funny experience to write on as well.

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premji premji 17 May 2009

made me laugh a lot.............loved it.......

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Luis Gil 16 May 2009

Some truly good lies..... Take care, Kesav

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Carol Gall 16 May 2009

good poem has humor and i like it thanks

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Fathmath Sana 16 May 2009

nice poeam. gr8t story buddy.10/10 hope u'll write more, thnx sana

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Muhammad Ali 15 May 2009

hahaha aik nuktay kay faraq nay mehmil say mujrim kar diya! ! :)

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good write and interesting little tale.

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Kale Beaudry 14 May 2009

The postscript definitely gives this poem its history. Very simple, but I found the poetic nature behind you being wiped off the poet list quite amusing. Good stuff, Kesav.

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Bonnie Collins 13 May 2009

This poem started out very warm can comfort zone material.... I enjoyed the feel you have given this... Good Write.... Bonnie

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Lynda Robson 12 May 2009

This made me smile Kesav, I always enjoy reading your poetry, that pesky 'n' he he 10 Lynda xx

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kerala- India
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