I sat down to write a comment line
Over two cups of good red wine
Listening to the midnight rain-
In one poem 'Rain' I mean
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I love this, though it may cause me to experiment with alphabetical excursions..(smile)
Friends are shapes Flow around the space Friends are angles Sharing common symmetrical patterns Sometimes like Numbers Even or odd – you’ll remember In simple or complex life’s equation TRUE Friends share honest opinion Hence.......Even without N It won't change the condition Thanks!
Very amusig, thaks to the electroic revolutio ad the side effects that come with it.. do you fiNd aNything missiNg in the first few words of my commeNt :)
this is my second encounter with today's 'RAIN' matter. thank you for sharing this funny poem! : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -)
Hi Kesav! Good thing your key board don't raise havoc with the A's or you would be Kesv Venkt Eswrn ! ! Kidding Lol ! ! Best wishes! *10*! Friend Thad
A nice idea for a light poem. May I offer one suggestion? Rather than using some prose to explain the genesis of the poem afterwards, expand the poem itself by incorporating the explanation (in verse) at the beginning of it.
nice poeam. gr8t story buddy.10/10 hope u'll write more, thnx sana
The postscript definitely gives this poem its history. Very simple, but I found the poetic nature behind you being wiped off the poet list quite amusing. Good stuff, Kesav.
This poem started out very warm can comfort zone material.... I enjoyed the feel you have given this... Good Write.... Bonnie
This made me smile Kesav, I always enjoy reading your poetry, that pesky 'n' he he 10 Lynda xx
'This N… The Zen Helps you to contemplate And encapsulate Your pen P ~ O ~ E ~ M*.' ~ niv Ms. Nivedita UK --- * For each alphabet two and half into four is equal to Ten