Friday, April 2, 2010

I Sailed My Ship (Version 2) Comments

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I sailed my ship to my true love's harbour
I sang my songs 'neath her windowsill
She gave me bread and her blood-red wine
She promised my deepest need to fulfill
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Göran Gustafsson
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Lynn Glover 01 January 2011

Beautifully done Goran. I love the rhymetic nature in the way you write and the rhyming really flows well. Great Job. Lynn

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Adeline Foster 09 July 2010

Very good this one. A couple of unexpected twists that resonate well. Adeline

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Milena Veleva 02 April 2010

You can walk on the poetry sea, a good one, Goran. Thanks.

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