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Can you send me that poem or tell me where I can order it. It is god it hurts

I actually read your rewrite (June 07) before I read this, your possible original. The feeling is, to me, identical. As for the 'polish', this the dark of night (pardon the double entendre) , and your rewrite is 'l ' heure bleue'. I find that sitting under a tree in that magical time of days end is a much better place to be, even if alone.... and perhaps before the second star presents itself, you'll have someone with whom to share the sky. I can but echo my comments re your revision... Wonderful!

your poem really touched me, and i mean really got me too. you have a way with words. i too was abused and know where your coming from, try to hold on, your worth more than those bad people.