I's And Eyes Comments

Going further! ! Looking beyond. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

I love how attractive you gave the title of this poem. The content make it more interesting to link I to the eyes, in a clever way of emphasizing selfishness and arrogant in very sophisticated lines. Beautiful!

Very interesting poem...I like the word play here...

The I causes many problems you are so write as you say in this deep great poem with wisdom. Well said poetically. Kudos. And best wishes,

Clever poem, Rajnish! With a very pertinent message. Well done!

mind's eyes........fine. Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

That is very true. I is the only culprit that stands between relations and spoils it. Once you shed this I all problems end. Very nice. A strong message.10++

Too much of I, the pretender and the impostor ego is always the culprit, of course as this poem rightly says. But I also agree with Geetaji that eyes too are the culprit. Well said indeed.

I and the eyes are always the culprit. Absolutely Rajnish ji, if only that changes, the world would be a better place......10

U R FLYING HIGH ON YOUR OWN I AND THE HORSE SAYS DON'T LOOK BACK IT'S EITHER YOU OR I WHO WILL ON POEM HUNTER FLY LET PPME CRY OR DIE Ask none why its todays world I

alter your EGO LET ALL GO WHO AM I A QUESTION NO HUMAN CAN ANSWER BUT WE ALL ARE NEURONS ASK ANY MODERN NEUROSURGEON ATOMS OR ATMA BOTH ORIGINATED FROM SANSKRIT ONE HINDI THE OTHER ENGLISH WHICH IS WHICH SOUL IS SIMPLY MAGNETISM ASK ANY MEDICO HOW THEY TAKE M R I U HAVE STOPPED READING MY MUNDANE POETRY RM JI

If we can change the I with a you, we shall see a better world. Loved the I-eye trick

The situation can be effectively changed When mind's eyes start looking beyond I's.....so touching and true. You have rightly said 'I is the main culprit.' A beautiful poem in brief is astutely presented. Thank you dear Manga Ji.10