I's And Eyes Poem by Rajnish Manga

mind's eyes........fine. Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

That is very true. I is the only culprit that stands between relations and spoils it. Once you shed this I all problems end. Very nice. A strong message.10++

Too much of I, the pretender and the impostor ego is always the culprit, of course as this poem rightly says. But I also agree with Geetaji that eyes too are the culprit. Well said indeed.

I and the eyes are always the culprit. Absolutely Rajnish ji, if only that changes, the world would be a better place......10

U R FLYING HIGH ON YOUR OWN I AND THE HORSE SAYS DON'T LOOK BACK IT'S EITHER YOU OR I WHO WILL ON POEM HUNTER FLY LET PPME CRY OR DIE Ask none why its todays world I

Going further! ! Looking beyond. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

I love how attractive you gave the title of this poem. The content make it more interesting to link I to the eyes, in a clever way of emphasizing selfishness and arrogant in very sophisticated lines. Beautiful!

Very interesting poem...I like the word play here...

The I causes many problems you are so write as you say in this deep great poem with wisdom. Well said poetically. Kudos. And best wishes,

Clever poem, Rajnish! With a very pertinent message. Well done!