Monday, March 22, 2010

I Remember You As You Were Comments

Rating: 3.2

I remember you as you were in the last autumn.
You were the grey beret and the still heart.
In your eyes the flames of the twilight fought on.
And the leaves fell in the water of your soul.
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Pablo Neruda
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Dr Antony Theodore 10 April 2020

I feel your eyes traveling, and the autumn is far off: Grey beret, voice of a bird, heart like a house Towards which my deep longings migrated And my kisses fell, happy as embers. wonderful romance. tony

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Mahtab Bangalee 10 April 2020

The remember still there is like before For the love the heart feels everything like before Poetic expression on the love of rememberance was very ecstatic way// greatly penned

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Savita Tyagi 10 April 2020

Lovely poem with marvelous imagery. One of a kind to be read again and again.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 April 2020

Wonderful imagery and imaginary. Beautiful poem by Pablo Neruda chosen as modern poem of the poem of the day.

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A commendable poem with excellent allegory and appealing analogy

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 April 2020

Remembrance! ! ! Musing along. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dominic Windram 10 April 2020

Such beautiful imagery!

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Unnikrishnan E S 22 November 2018

Extraordinary. Excellent.

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John C. Mason 20 August 2018

I find that the recitations of poems must be done by a robot identity....the fluidity and rhythm of language that have been earned from the poet's creative spirit have been completely abused. Surely, you have the opportunity to find recitaters who reflect some linguistic and humanitarian talent to orally reproduce good poetry!

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Surajit Banerjee 01 June 2015

'Beyond your eyes, farther on, the evenings were blazing' reminds me a line of poem of Rabindranath Tagore which reads somewhat like this 'in the fiery evening I saw my doom in your eyes'

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Chloe Garrison 22 February 2015

Breath taking ♡♡

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Brian Jani 27 April 2014

Awesome I like this poem, check mine out 

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Brian Jani 27 April 2014

Awesome I like this poem, check mine out 

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Shreya Ganguly 19 December 2012

another masterpiece...

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