Monday, June 23, 2014

I Remember You Comments

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whenever i sing i remember you.
whenever i murmur i remember you..
whenever i wear something i remember you..
whenever i go somewhere i remember you.
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amit yadav
remember stay Memories
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Yu-ying Lee 23 June 2014

This is a great and emotive poem. Perhaps you could add a bit more?

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Cleveland Gibson 23 June 2014

It is a very short poem that needs the internal voice lifted. And write the other side of the coin: what happens when you foget a Birthday, a date, buying a present, etc IMO. What happens then?

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