I Remember Those Lies Comments

Oh Shakeel, you got a beautiful expression! So true from heart, sweet and poignant!

Heartbreaking story told in such a distinghished manner. Nice usage of words. It flowed beautifully into a tremendous piece of art. KW

Oh, for heavens sake, get over it g ood flow, Shakil

Deceit wears many disguises. But no one who seeks love is a fool. We are foolish only when we say we no longer need or want love. A very emotional, well written poem.

Lies hurts! Nice work.

The doublespeak of lovers can create not only misunderstandings but also grave problems for the relationship. Amazing portrayal of the situation. Thanks.

This is very good poem which speaks about the innocence of a human mind...Though I live with flesh and bone Yet in the world, I am terribly alone.10.

Lovely poem and very artistic presentation.