Saturday, December 6, 2008

I Remember The Used Comments

Rating: 4.8

I remember the used,
The ones abused,
Beaten to depression,
Tears of pain,
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Shireen Ramadan 16 July 2012

This me world abused, My life a world of pain, Memories of hate, The smell of confusion, The darkness of my depression, A life used. I loved that part, if you would read my poem Abused it is a little bit similar to your amazement.

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Party Girl 26 May 2009

i love this poem. it brought alot of thoughts to my mind because i'm goin through a divorce because my husband beat me and alot of other stuff. i get depressed alot cause i'm only 18 and i have a 5 month old son and its hard doing it all alone. but i really love this poem

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Ted Sheridan 09 December 2008

Keep speaking and writing from your heart and draw from what you know and what you will learn. Keep up the good work.

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Hey, I love this sestina.. read my poem, I hate doors.. It too is a sestina.

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