Saturday, July 29, 2006

I Remember The Day Comments

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I remember the day.
That day the world turned its back on me.
The day my family got ripped apart.
The day reality tore at my heart.
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Francesca Johnson 29 July 2006

Not quite 14 and yet writing some very readable poetry. I like the way you have set this one out, Ruby, but sad that your world has been torn apart. Love, Fran xx

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