Saturday, August 9, 2008

I Remember Comments

Rating: 4.8

street lights are still lit up
as she fills my coffee cup
with same greeting everyday
"how's your mom doing today? "
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Manonton Dalan
mom
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Jane Campion 12 June 2019

Reminds me I need a cup of coffee. Cheer!

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Chinedu Dike 03 June 2019

An insightful piece of poetry, well conceived and nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 March 2019

Street lights are still up and the fill the coffee cup. You have brilliantly penned this excellent poem. Thank you very much for sharing this lovely gem.

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Brenda Aniban 06 November 2016

A nice romantic poem

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Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek 02 August 2016

Very nice poem. Thanks for sharing such an experience.

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Rajnish Manga 18 July 2016

To recall a mischief of the past sometimes gives immense delight and makes life worth it. i touch her arm; whisper sorry she's so pretty i could remember

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Mohammad Skati 02 June 2016

It is clearly a pretty poem. I loved it. Thanks.

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 May 2016

i blush, i feel my heart pounds i touch her arm; whisper sorry she waves her hand; smiles at me yes, i give a last quick look at her she's so pretty i could remember.. remembrances of a lovely experience penned down so lovely. thank you, tony

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Fatemeh Tarkashvand 18 April 2016

So touchy. Bravo

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Sofia Kioroglou 24 March 2016

Exquisite! Lost for words!

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Abderrahmane Dakir 27 January 2016

Lovely poem. I like it so much. Thank you for sharing.

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Marilyn Lott 16 January 2016

Such a sweet romantic poem. I enjoy the quick story that makes me wonder - what if? Very nice!

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Nosheen Irfan 08 January 2016

A beautiful memory of a brief encounter with a beautiful face...emotions very well expressed here.

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Howard Savage 27 December 2015

Profound emotions, we at some point in our lives can remember a special moment. Well done.

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 December 2015

i blush, i feel my heart pounds i touch her arm; whisper sorry she waves her hand; smiles at me yes, i give a last quick look at her she's so pretty i could remember.. attraction, love, fascination, woman. all a mystery in life and emotions. thank you for all your lovely expressions in this poem. tony

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Hemendra Singh Deopa 20 December 2015

Wow this is a good one, she must be very beautiful I can imagine. Hope you meet her almost everyday by now.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 December 2015

by god she left no lips stick i can't believe so many below don't also your tongue must have been glued at once blush blush

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Thomas Plotz 09 December 2015

What no jelly sugar on your face, when you looked at her? Nice poem

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Mannah Shekh 05 December 2015

Ah it's so nice... Thank you dear poet

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Anitah Muwanguzi 03 December 2015

hahahha. Flirty good piece. Enjoyed the experience.

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