Wednesday, May 2, 2007

I Remember Comments

Rating: 4.5

I remember a vast dark ocean,
Sometimes calm, sometimes stormy.
Me swimming for my life,
To stay on the surface,
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Susan Ash
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Ernestine Northover 16 May 2007

Nicely penned piece. Good visual impact, Interesting storyline. Great read. Love Ernestine XXX

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Jerry Hughes 11 May 2007

...superbly expressed - this lady writes so well

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