Wednesday, October 21, 2020

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Every shout out to the future
Always ends up in the past
Dead and dying in the embers
Of a fate that didn't last
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Drew Engman
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Deluke Muwanigwa 22 October 2020

Nice poem. I reckon you can achieve more symmetry if you rearrande 2nd phase rhyming scheme so it matches first. Just a thot

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