Tuesday, March 17, 2015

I Remember Comments

Rating: 5.0

I remember those days when you use to lay your head upon my breasts and fall asleep on me as i gently rubbed your head.
That is something that takes away my breath.

I remember those days when you use to show up at my drive and knock on my door with a smile on your face mischief in your eyes and ask if I wanted to go outside, to go for a ride.
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Jeri Martindale
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Rebecca Navarre 23 November 2016

Oh, How Beautifully Heart Warming! ! ! Brings Tender Thoughts! ! ! Soft Smiles Of Reflection! ! ! From Deeply Beautiful Moments! ! ! Thank You So Much Jeri, For Sharing This Wonderful Poem! ! ! 10s! ! !

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Sandra Feldman 14 July 2015

You really, delicately and lovingly made us feel your love journey. Great dominium of feelings thru words. Congratulations

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Akhtar Jawad 17 March 2015

A beautiful narration in a lovely poem wherein lines are flowing like a boat in a lake. How simply and nicely it has been narrated as to how she fell in love......................10

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Jeri Martindale 17 March 2015

thank you very much! !

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Jeri Martindale

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