Sunday, February 7, 2010

I Remember Comments

Rating: 4.5

I remember the night you asked me that special question
It was Christmas eve
I was speechless
You told me to think about it and call you in two days to give you my answer
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Luna Conley 07 March 2010

*Sigh... I've been there before. Sorry to hear that such a sad occassion made such a descriptive poem. Nice write, I defnately feel your emotions.

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Sarah Marie 06 March 2010

Very emotional and very descriptive much. I know how it is: -/ nice poem.

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Zack Burton 06 March 2010

Very good. It seems as if every poem I read hits home lately, concerning the things my friends go through, the things I go through, and the things everybody goes through. I have one friend who keeps trying to find love, but it keeps slipping away... it's tearing her up... But nevermind. Good poem. Good narrative style.

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Adam Reed 06 March 2010

u got some interesting predicaments...

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Darlene Styles 12 February 2010

very good write

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Adam Reed 08 February 2010

its poems like this that inspire me to write. great work miss shine lol =)

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Emma Kessler 07 February 2010

It's a very moving poem, I can feel the emotion when I read it. Wonderful.

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Amanda Adams 07 February 2010

wow... um i don't know what too say that is so deep and... wow is all i can say!

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