Monday, November 9, 2009

I Remember... Comments

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It's been 10 yrs.,
when I last saw your face,
when you looked into my eyes,
the reflection of your face made me look more younger.
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Priyanka Bhowmick
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Ranjit Ravindran 09 November 2009

Memory can be a blessing as well as a curse. It is really painful. The last line raked up all sorrows on to the surface. Beautifully done Priyanka. Wish it was just a fiction.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 09 November 2009

nice write. It is very well written.

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Indira Renganathan 09 November 2009

Melancholic words on a lasting past love stirring the heart very much...makes the reader feel very sorry10

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Sandra Martyres 09 November 2009

A very touching and poignant piece Priyanka.....

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