I Remember..1 Comments

Ah, i enjoy the green dance Each blade, a dancing grass Makes me sure to sing, sing........A beautiful song and dance with the exotic nature...10

I too enjoyed your rambling through the paddy fields. A beautiful experience celebrated through lyrical lines!

As one area comes to be inhabited by affluent people, thieves find it an ideal place to plunder! That happens everywhere. With over population, it is quite possible for a place to be messy! It is unfortunate that the lane smelling spicy turned to be one of nasty odor.....! You have drawn a realistic picture of the lane!

The paddy pats my cheek so fondly I cuddle chestful of the grass so lovingly Only to this emerald i ever sing, sing......haunting expression. Beautiful poem is shared amazingly. Thanks for sharing.

Wow! ! Great poems indeed. Nice concept and sweet flow and rhyming. Enjoyed thoroughly.