Sunday, October 31, 2010

I Remain Comments

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My thrilling laughter pleads in favour of you
The causual blinks stunned by the honest view
The quiet, true eyes whisper to my soul and I surrender
Every single breath, all fearless moments i'm staying under
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Dagimawi Tujuba
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C N Prem Kumar 01 November 2010

A very different approach in poetry. The poem conveys the feeling while holding the mystery. Excellent.

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Kevin Carney 31 October 2010

A very beautifully written poem. If only we can be fearless all the time, you express this so well. Thank you so much for sharing.

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