Friday, June 20, 2014

I Regret To Be Part Of This Play! Comments

Rating: 5.0

I regret some where in my heart
Where I was too beautifully trapped to play
I never wanted to play this character
But time forced me into it.
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 March 2022

Went through this poem and I could feel why do you decide this way? But I suggest you to revive your interest. Please rethink...

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Savita Tyagi 25 June 2014

Yes time traps us all. Pleasant or painful it just makes me wonder how chain of events take place.

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Ramesh Rai 22 June 2014

If it happens unknowingly i take it granted as prearranged

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Lyn Paul 21 June 2014

Oh how I admire the worker who remained calm and pleasant in a busy situation. Employers must expect occasional mishap. So sorry you worried so much. The title is so suited Geetha. It probably now puts you off shopping. Too You are welcomed back with open arms from us all. X

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Amitava Sur 21 June 2014

Though it may be ended with a pity, but Geetha you were not at fault, but you were a witness to the situation.but you felt sorry that is great.

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First of all I am happy you are back with your mighty pen........Geetha........this poem reminds us we are puppets in the hands of time........we are helpless to circumstances..........our strings pulled by unknown forces............... A great write with a great message......................

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Salini Nair 21 June 2014

curiosity that takes till the end...nice...like it.....

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 20 June 2014

Time plays games. One thing adds to another, Sequence of events nicely described.

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Neela Nath Das 20 June 2014

Yes Time is a great trickster.I believe this.How beautifully you can narrate! From the beginning to the end you can draw your readers wonderfully.Kudos!

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Kirti Sharma 20 June 2014

what goes around comes back around... a message in your nice work.. i like it! !

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Geetha Jayakumar

Geetha Jayakumar

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