I regard life is a steep hill...
...upon which the people climb...
...toward the unreachable peak...
...the goal of life!
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'Stop for a while and look around, Behold God in everything... ...in beauties spread about; ' - loved these lovely lines! It seems you enjoy only writing and posting, never answering a reader's comment! But that's okay, a poet is not bound to do anything against his choice. I respect your choice.
While climbing the steep Hill Road of life, See to it that you do not carry a heavy load... ... on your back; That's right... often unnecessary burdens often stand as a bottleneck on the path of one's journey towards the ultimate goal... so nice a piece of poem... Thanks...