Friday, September 29, 2006

I Really Pray For Happier Days! Comments

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I feel like I am on fire,
it is not from any desire.
Smoke I can smell,
from this living hell.
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David Darbyshire
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Tiyler Durden 29 September 2006

Great Poem Dave, keep this up 10 for tiyler

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Patricia Gale 29 September 2006

Thought provoking and I agree pray for happier days

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***** ********* 29 September 2006

David, A very thoughtful and enquiring poem, as to where do we go from here. Imo we can all seek and find what you are looking for, but we can only do it individually. I could not live in the rat race, which is what the Cornish call all life beyond the Tamar Bridge,60 milies from here! It is their border. Life is much slower this side of it, and they do everything directly! ! ! which is whenever! ! lol Some folks love the fast lane, possibly all of us at some time or another in our lives, but we all change. Go for your dreams, Smiling at you, Tai

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Lynda Robson 29 September 2006

Nice poem Dave, and oh so true, take a chill pill Love L xx

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Danny Reynolds 29 September 2006

Nice one Dave, from the rat race to Happy Days! The Fonz would approve, cool. Danny

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Tiyler Durden 29 September 2006

Great one Dave, I like ones like this....10 for tiyler

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