Tuesday, April 23, 2013

I Realize Comments

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These little demons are in my head. It's not death, it's them that I dread. More often than not, I stay awake, for fear that my mind will surely break. I am so very sorry that I lost you because I realize: I lost me too. The thought of you is what I hold dear. Missing you keeps me right here. I look in the mirror and ask myself 'Why? ' I know the answer, and it makes me cry. I am so very sorry that I hurt you because I realize: I hurt me too. All I do now is avoid reflection. Pieces are scattered beyond detection.
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David Wood 23 April 2013

It rhymes well but you need to put your poem in stanzas to make it flow and easier to read. Never the less a good write. Keep writing.

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Gajanan Mishra 23 April 2013

my love I will never let go. good poem. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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