I Raised My Fist Comments

raised my fist at my brother to slap, Heard some sound from the back with clap, Turning back to look at was turning point,

There was no luxury and means scarce, Good men were stared and laughed with farce,

just struck me how non-violence might have started? All luxury and smooth path might have been parted

Good men were stared and laughed with farce, Kind words were laughed at lightly, Often misunderstood and not taken rightly, great lines in a great poem

soon realised it is wrong....10

in anger and hatred....10

inanger to hit a person inrage....10

u loose control when in anger....10

we loose sense in anger....10

in order to hit and realised the mistake...10

i raised fist to hit but got struck with some sense....10

to hit a person in anger/////10

in anger to hit....10

in anger u do unwanted things....10

just to hit out at the object...10

anger is very nad thing to be controlled...10

raised fist ion anger to hit...10

raised my fist to hit inanger....10

I raised my fist at my brother to slap, Heard some sound from the back with clap, and realised it is wrong...10

I raised my fist at my brother to slap, Heard some sound from the back with clap...and realiszed it is wrong...10