Saturday, May 2, 2009

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I could say im never worried
Say i know you'll be ok
But i would be pretending
For you, every night i pray
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Brianna Trombley
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Kesav Easwaran 13 May 2009

good write...thanks...10

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This is a really heartfelt piece Brianna. It gives hope for a better change in circumstances. You have rhymed it all and I enjoyed it! Karin Anderson

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Kimber Harrison 02 May 2009

You can really feal the emotion put into it. Some of the stanza's are a little rusty, but it's an altogether GREAT poem! :)

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Ency Bearis 02 May 2009

A nice soliloquy write....well expressed...and significant...10

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the flow and sequence is just perfect for the poem..which is magnificent

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Brianna Trombley

Brianna Trombley

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