Tuesday, February 21, 2023

I Quit Comments

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I QUIT

I quit making random comments
I want to run and lie on the cements
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Naom Kerubo
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Chinedu Dike 30 March 2023

An interesting creation nicely embellished with poetic rhymes and rhythms

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Bri Edwards 30 March 2023

Cement is wet; when it dries it becomes concrete. line 13: 'stick', not 'stuck'. In Poet's Notes, do you MEAN 'apart' or 'a part'? bri : )

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Smoky Hoss 30 March 2023

Beautiful sincerity. A compassionate song of the heart.

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