Saturday, May 12, 2012

I Put A Penny Down Comments

Rating: 5.0

I put a penny down,
the man said it ain't enough.
A penny just won't pay,
For all of this here stuff.
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Juan Olivarez
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Captain Cur 14 May 2012

If Simple acts of kindness can define who we become in life, what becomes of those who have only been shown hate. Great memory poem, with a lasting ending.

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Eric Cockrell 13 May 2012

wow! this one grabs the heart in a most human way! well done!

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Smoky Hoss 13 May 2012

Wow Juan, this is one of the best, most heart-stirring poems I've read in a long, long time, so good. Thanks for giving it to us. Love it!

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Heather Wilson 13 May 2012

Oh, that really had a punch line, a beautiful poem. with a real message to help others.

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