Monday, December 16, 2013

I Promise Comments

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I promise to look upon the skies
where you sanctify the night heavens.
I promise to stay by the glades
to embrace your sparkling rays.
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Hans Vr 26 January 2014

Good poem, very strong beginning. Well written

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 30 December 2013

I promise to buy you a rose and always get you a rose. I promise to be your guide and to hold your hand. very sweet and it is from a casino dealer..thank you, fate mcfate..

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