Saturday, April 25, 2009

I Promise Comments

Rating: 5.0

I kept screaming
Not letting you sleep
All I did was fuss, I remember
How bad I was, now I weep
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Alen Alexander
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 March 2010

You wouldn’t let go Until I was asleep U cared for me more Like a shepherd’s care for his sheep ..........................oh dear so nicley put your feeling across.. i loved it.....10 read mine... i miss.. cry not

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 17 June 2009

Promise is fragile, you break you pay.Nice rhythm!

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Shashendra Amalshan 30 May 2009

yeah a touching and moving poem indeed, , well expressed..nice Allen

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Jazz Annis 30 May 2009

wow...i can't possibly live without my mom! i'm so sorry this poem touched my heart!

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Natalie Sheldon 25 April 2009

this gave me goosebumps it swnds like ur mam was lovely nd u were lucky 2 have her great poem keep writting xx

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