Friday, December 2, 2005

I Pray Comments

Rating: 3.5

perilous
where i feel
i'm in.
here
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tara mahdavi
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Jerry Hughes 04 March 2006

Excellent, Tara. You're writing very well...

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Charles M Moore 04 March 2006

Beautful line, God I need a brush to paint the emptiness inside, very poetic view of emptiness, Charlie.

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