I Pray Comments

Dear Aden, I start my day with prayers; prayer is something we should never forget! I loved your poem.10! -Raj Nandy

i like the emotion this is great

' god i need you to shine the light and grab my hand pull me away' i pray 2, lovely poem in all meanings

You seem to be a very honest writer that speaks from his soul, good write

He's always here loking over us Aden.No matter how hard it gets, take time out.Concentrate on the beauty of creation, Forests, Trees, Beautiful sunsets.Sitting down to conversation with a friend over a beer. Best wishes Aden.Good write.A 10 from me.

Flow and thoughts praisworthy! fine! .......10+

I love this! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

With a little editing this will be another winner Aden - - please proof-read your work though because this is so important.... people really do notice typos...... I think this deserves top marks however for it's content..... from Fay.