I Pledge My Love Comments
in my heart love stepped inside
and you could hear the battle cry.
because of your love, i have lost my head
i turn and toss each night in bed.
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A good confession of love. Your ingedients are good especially the idea of not 'smothering' the freely given love of the other when it's so easy to do so.
I also know that you may smother This will attempt you to search for another These two lines let me know that this is a perfect love poem between two who care and respect each other deeply. What a great life to be in 10++
Louis the beauty of this poem..is it's passion for life...it's tone is soothing it holds the reader in a state of calmness...as always my friend..a joyful 10+++
Very sincere, loving words that create thoughts from a true heart. Romantic and cherishing, truly a love felt very deep. Written in an honorable way, expressing feelings of a caring soul. Nicely done. DC
hey.. hey.. be careful not to put her before God..........ok.
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8/16/2025 10:31:05 PM # 1.0.0
Beautiful love poem nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.
i am truly enriched with GODS blessings and co poets such as you