I Pierced My Aching Heart At Last Comments
Your love was like a crimson rose
so soft, so pure
it bloomed and shone
for all to see
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Wonderful imagery, excellent pacing, and brings a quiet ache to my heart. An understood poem, well made. Fantastic!
I saw my rose dropp to the ground crushed by this hands. So intense stanza and i love the conclusion of the poem when the poet pour out all his fear and bravery for something that he believe. Well done.
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7/28/2025 9:04:03 PM # 1.0.0
lovely poem written well with nice texture and imagery. Quite descriptive yet interesting. You have done a great job. Well done. Keep on writing.