Friday, January 2, 2009

I Peep On You Comments

Rating: 3.9

I peep on you
When you say
You don’t love me
I saw your rose pulps
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
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Ms Presumptuous 22 December 2019

Well she too peeped on you!

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Raymichelle Springer 25 January 2009

This one was good.i have one question though what were you thinking when u wrote this. You have me curious about what you think about when you write your poems Sulaiman......

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Cassie Wheathers 23 January 2009

wow. i love it...but im suprised the site didnt remove it, they can be sensitive sometimes.

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Rayjean Carter 19 January 2009

this poem is...interesting...i get the feeling of 'desire to know wat you don't' from this poem....good imagination

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Vijay Gupta 18 January 2009

good imagination i like it.

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Ken E Hall 15 January 2009

Hi what a cute healthy poem so so original and quite funny but very clever, I think Mick Jagger could sing this one ' I can't get no da da da da' kind regards

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Khadijah Tate 14 January 2009

Y0u DiD A Very GOOd i LiKE THiS POEm iTs KuTE!

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Aijaz Asif 14 January 2009

nice peep: p.... :) only you know how to change the mood of poem and put smile on readers lips, i loved it thanks for sharing 10's peeps for this beautiful write rgds asif

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Sarwar Chowdhury 13 January 2009

THIS IS A GREAT PEEP! 10++

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Min Sia 12 January 2009

The instincts..the intuitions of a heart inlove..fully expressed through bodies..no words ever needed... Truly..expressive words... Thanks for sharing...Great piece!

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sumaira .....ir 11 January 2009

U have a great sence of judgement than: -) ... nice and beautiful words...

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 11 January 2009

interesting piece.....the body expresses more than words-10

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Lal Hauzel 10 January 2009

Good...Better still if u can let the words (or the poem as a whole) rhyme. Keep it up!

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~ Jon London ~ 09 January 2009

The way you explore the boundries bro, never fails to amaze....you are a true poet of genius qualities.....and it's always a pleasure to read your work. Keep bouncing them out bro....you're a first class writer, of the highest form. Thanks for this.....Your brother Jon

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Arquavia Pryor 07 January 2009

lol yea its gud i lyke it bt it tells me dat u is probably a freak but i hope u not lyke dat but kool poem once again

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hahahahhaha...I laughed......Good one! ! <33Payyton

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Drascilla Chihope 07 January 2009

hey i liked your poem ya bt at the other hand it makes me think u a kinda dirty, soz if this is offending you

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J Marsters 06 January 2009

Very very interesting. Witty

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Jay Mutinda 06 January 2009

I mean dont u think its kinda dirty.........bt i loved it though........it made me laugh.

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L.P. Alexanders 05 January 2009

I really liked it, nice writing Sulaiman, great job and keep writing! ! I hope you leave a comment on one of my poems, at least, if you dont mind and if you have time of course! Happy new year 2009!

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