I peep on you
When you say
You don’t love me
I saw your rose pulps
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This one was good.i have one question though what were you thinking when u wrote this. You have me curious about what you think about when you write your poems Sulaiman......
wow. i love it...but im suprised the site didnt remove it, they can be sensitive sometimes.
this poem is...interesting...i get the feeling of 'desire to know wat you don't' from this poem....good imagination
Hi what a cute healthy poem so so original and quite funny but very clever, I think Mick Jagger could sing this one ' I can't get no da da da da' kind regards
nice peep: p.... :) only you know how to change the mood of poem and put smile on readers lips, i loved it thanks for sharing 10's peeps for this beautiful write rgds asif
The instincts..the intuitions of a heart inlove..fully expressed through bodies..no words ever needed... Truly..expressive words... Thanks for sharing...Great piece!
U have a great sence of judgement than: -) ... nice and beautiful words...
interesting piece.....the body expresses more than words-10
Good...Better still if u can let the words (or the poem as a whole) rhyme. Keep it up!
The way you explore the boundries bro, never fails to amaze....you are a true poet of genius qualities.....and it's always a pleasure to read your work. Keep bouncing them out bro....you're a first class writer, of the highest form. Thanks for this.....Your brother Jon
lol yea its gud i lyke it bt it tells me dat u is probably a freak but i hope u not lyke dat but kool poem once again
hahahahhaha...I laughed......Good one! ! <33Payyton
hey i liked your poem ya bt at the other hand it makes me think u a kinda dirty, soz if this is offending you
I mean dont u think its kinda dirty.........bt i loved it though........it made me laugh.
I really liked it, nice writing Sulaiman, great job and keep writing! ! I hope you leave a comment on one of my poems, at least, if you dont mind and if you have time of course! Happy new year 2009!
Well she too peeped on you!