James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Thursday, May 28, 2009

I Peek, As She Peeks, Apeeker, Peeking Comments

Rating: 5.0

i look at the window, the curtains move in
an airless room, deja vi the feeling in it's self
always new, when i think this thought that i think in you.
what is it, that makes it you, you thinking of me watching
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James McLain
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Lady Grace 29 May 2009

the title is good, it is like a tongue twister.the contents are expressive.lots of colors are mentioned.this poem is lively.grace

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~EmmaLeigh~ Smith 28 May 2009

I find you very colorful and utterly interesting. beautiful writing.

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Kimbaline Navas 28 May 2009

nice... i like this

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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