I Owe It To You! ! ! Comments

as love unified.....beautiful expression of love ingenuous, i like the poem, well penned yet

In many poems I find a universal truth forcibly added to make the poem attractive. But to you they come naturally through the sincerity of your passion. The line 'Untill the day you showed me light' is another example. The role of lover as the other's torch bearer, friend, guide and philosopher is beautifully expressed.

Must agree with Giblin, these to lines are well executed and deliver the truth of love well done

If you’re hurt, I get the pain If you’re happy, I’m the one who smile true love captured in just 2 line great work love kuttus