Tuesday, September 29, 2020

I Opened My Heart To Set My Soul Free. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Because I cannot count all the stars
During this lifetime
Hence, I started to like the moon.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Gordon Walter 30 September 2020

Deep philosophy of life. Indeed your poems are simple yet far reaching in meaning.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 30 September 2020

POem Rains full of freedom

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 30 September 2020

Singing soul's song with much belief in Allah and performing righteous work a person will receive reward. The deep philosophy we understand from your magnificent poem song. Your highly poetic skill and deep philosophical perception you have expressed in this splendid poem. I have taken this poem into my list and rated full stars (5 stars) for your high effort of penning this mystical poem!

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 30 September 2020

Thoughts are many and we want to write many poems. But time is limited as we have short lifespan! We have to do many duties at a time. Thoughts are like unstable sea waves. However we need stability! You are clever enough to set heart and sing song of soul with full freedom and having confidence by mercy of Allah! You have concrete trust. No one can prevent you to sing souls' song!

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 30 September 2020

Memorizing and honouring Prophet Muhammad and divine beauty, rose flower is importantly used as symbol of spirituality in Islam. Fragrance of rose is special. To touch each soul and merciful father Allah, you want to become fragrance of rose. I highly appreciate your wonderful thought reflecting divinity of your mind and trust for Allah! Each stanza in this poem has wonderful dignity!

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 30 September 2020

In Luqman (31: 27) , Yaseen (36: 80) , Rahman (55: 6) , and in Waqiah (56: 72) we briefly understand the values of trees through valuable learning. Your song's verse is directed towards heart and soul to become a perfect tree rather than leaves is very pleasing. Becoming a rose, the Holy Flower is good but on which stem you should bloom! This is better to become fragrance of values!

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 30 September 2020

There are trillions of trees and multiple trillions of leaves and this is difficult to count them. But becoming like a tree you can give leaves, fresh oxygen, flower, fruits, shelter to creatures, shed and selfless service we learn. However the Holy Qur'an describes about the Word Tree in many verses! In this regard I love to recite Surah Hajj - Ayat 18 [22: 18], Muminun - Ayat 20 (23: 20) and Naml - Ayat 60 [27: 60]

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 30 September 2020

In thins song you have heartily sung to become sea because you want to inherit and charge the values of Allah within you and us to become so good, so special and very honest. Just I recite Surah Al-Baqarah [2: 218] to feel real hope related to Mercy of Allah. Believing in the way of Allah, a person truly feels the mercy. Allah is ocean of all values. Framing us in his shape is ever necessary!

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 30 September 2020

Then I have moved to read your tis lovely poem. Theme of goodness is reflected in different ways. Your poem carries natural essence of goodness. This is difficult to count all the stars and deeply observe them although we watch them daily. But Moon is specially felt well due to calmness and beauty! This is better to become a sea rather than counting waves.

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 29 September 2020

How wonderful your song is! This is not only a poem but a special heart touching song! Specially I love such musical poetry naturally sung and repeatedly expressed from heart and soul through natural rhythm! Just I have read a Saddest Song of poetess Sylvia Frances Chan and song poem of goodness by Gajanan Mishra and another song of good thought sung by Muzahidul Reza!

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Suzon Albert 29 September 2020

Excellent poem. Like a wordsmith you played naturally with the words. I liked the fow.10

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Susan Williams 29 September 2020

This is the very definition of poetry! ! ! Fell in love with it from the first line and wanted to keep on reading it when it was done. I favor the use of repetition in a poem that is written to a grand scale like this one. Top marks

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Gordon Walter 29 September 2020

What a fabulous closing line... I admire your skills.

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Michael Jack 29 September 2020

Brilliant poem. Since my pen cannot write everything Which my mind keeps thinking I opened my heart to set my soul free.

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Deepak S S 29 September 2020

Such a wonderful poem my friend.5 stars

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Varsha M 29 September 2020

This is beautiful tercet. Well articulated. Since my pen cannot write everything Which my mind keeps thinking I opened my heart to set my soul free.....this is very good words.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 29 September 2020

Excellent one. Flows nice and easy then wham! the pay off

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Sharad Bhatia 29 September 2020

A pure magnificent poem 100++

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M. Asim Nehal

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