Monday, June 28, 2010

I Open My Hand And... Comments

Rating: 5.0

The taraxo achos seeds
Blow...
Gently into the breeze
Aloft, with a wish of safe return
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Marcus McKinley
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Almedia Knight-Oliver 24 July 2010

How sweet! 'All my dreams scatter/across the night sky' Hoping one day again/ toi be/the sparkle in your eye. You order your words, as such, they just flow across and down the page. A 10 [ some times the vote does not register] any way I give this poem a a ten.

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