I Open My Eyes Comments
The air tastes different out here
The stream plays the pebbles like a harp
There is no line that separates the mountain from the valley
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Wow! Totally loved this poem, your ideas are intently creative, grasping the mind throughout the entire poem! A surprise ending turning around and hitting us with it's simple and ordinary feelings we all have at one time or another. Thank you for sharing and please continue writing, you have a unique and inventive creativity that I do enjoy very much. RoseAnn
Ah, thank you so much, Roseann. Your encouragment rests deeply in my heart, thank you. Much love.
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8/9/2025 9:45:34 PM # 1.0.0
A great start with a nice poem, Victor. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks